Example 2:
None of the paintings is valuable except the battle pieces.
I think that what this is saying (using intuition) is that, if you
give me a Painting then it is not Valuable unless you give me a Battle
piece in which case it is Valuable; thus, in symbols:
I agree, so: $$\forall x\big(Px\to(Vx\leftrightarrow Bx)\big).\tag1$$
However, there is another interpretation of the word 'except': $$\forall x\big(Px\to(Vx\to Bx)\big).\tag2$$
Everyone except Sue attended the event.
Sue did not attend the event.
I won't take an umbrealla, except when it rains.
When it rains, I may still not take an umbrella.
Example 1:
No intelligent person who drinks to excess also eats to excess.
a) $\forall x(Ix \implies -(Dx \lor Ex)$
a) No (intelligent person) who (drinks to excess also eats to excess)
b) $\forall x(Ix \land Dx \implies -Ex).$
b) No (intelligent person who drinks to excess) also (eats to excess)
Option B is correct because the given sentence doesn't assert anything about moderate drinkers who are intelligent.
Notice that Option B has the categorical structure "No X is Y", whereas forcing Option A to correspond to the natural-language sentence results in the verbal connectives being illogically placed.
For completeness, Mauro's translation: $\lnot \exists x (Ix \land Dx \land Ex);$ note that some (not me) may judge this to be logically equivalent to a translation rather than actually a translation.